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Designing and implementing empowerment-based academic English writing instruction
刘佳 ,  张文忠    作者信息&出版信息
Foreign Language Education in China   ·   2025年9月13日   ·   2025年 8卷 第2期   ·   DOI:10.20083/j.cnki.fleic.2025.0016
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1 Introduction

This section discusses the importance and current state of academic English writing instruction design in higher education. It points out that research on academic English writing teaching in China has progressed from introduction and imitation to innovation, yet overall remains in an experimental exploration phase, with issues such as mismatched learning tasks and students' writing abilities, as well as suboptimal teaching effectiveness. Additionally, traditional teaching models neglect student agency and lack attention to students' academic interests. Furthermore, existing studies predominantly focus on writing skill development while overlooking the role of instructional design in enhancing writing-related competencies. To address these issues, this study attempts to design instruction based on the educational concept of empowerment, aiming to improve the effectiveness of academic English writing teaching.

2 Empowerment-Based Academic English Writing Instructional Design

This section introduces the application of the empowerment education approach in academic English writing instruction. This approach emphasizes the integration of roles, rights, and responsibilities, advocating for personalized learning plans and task designs that combine "doing, learning, and applying." In academic English writing instruction, students formulate learning plans based on their interests, teachers design relevant learning tasks, and students gain empowerment through task completion. The instructional design centers on interest-based readers, where students identify their academic interests, gather materials, and compile readers. In this process, students assume the role of researchers, exercising choice and fulfilling corresponding responsibilities. During instruction, students also engage in presentations of their academic interests, peer exchanges, and reflective evaluations. Teachers play multiple roles, providing knowledge explanations, guidance, and feedback. Through empowerment-based teaching, students' awareness of roles, rights, and responsibilities is enhanced, promoting the integration of learning and application and improving writing quality.

3 Research Design

This chapter presents the research design of a study on the empowerment-based academic English writing teaching model. The study aims to explore whether this instructional design can enhance students' academic English writing abilities and to understand students' evaluations of the course's effectiveness. The participants were first-year non-English majors from a "Double First-Class" university in northern China, divided into an experimental class and a control class, each with 35 students. Pre-test results showed no significant difference in writing ability between the two classes. The teaching experiment lasted 12 weeks, with the control class using traditional teaching methods and the experimental class adopting the empowerment-based instructional design, including planning, group discussions, classroom presentations, teacher explanations, and student reflections. Students in the experimental class were required to independently source reading materials, complete writing tasks, and write reflective journals, culminating in the compilation of an academic interest reader at the end of the term. Data collection included scoring and analysis of written texts, questionnaires, and reflective journals. Written texts were scored based on Connor-Linton & Polio's rubric, supplemented by Li's summary writing assessment criteria, covering five dimensions: content, paragraph organization, vocabulary use, syntactic use, and source text utilization. Questionnaires used a Likert five-point scale to gauge students' attitudes toward the course. Reflective journals provided descriptions of students' task completion, learning experiences, and teaching evaluations, complementing the writing and questionnaire data to achieve triangulation.

4 Research Results and Discussion

Students in the experimental class showed significant improvement in academic English writing ability, particularly in vocabulary and syntactic use. Compared to the traditional teaching model, the empowerment-based instructional design was more effective, with the experimental class outperforming the control class in vocabulary and syntactic use. Students' language application skills improved markedly and surpassed those of the control class. The instructional design incorporated interest-driven tasks, motivating students and enhancing writing quality and engagement. By compiling academic interest readers, students engaged in extensive reading and language application, improving their writing proficiency. Reflective journals revealed that students demonstrated a strong sense of responsibility, meticulously refining their drafts to enhance writing quality. The empowerment-based instructional design aligned with students' cognitive abilities, fostering writing skill development. Multiple rounds of teacher-student co-evaluation provided timely and continuous feedback, helping students focus on writing priorities, identify and correct issues, and elevate writing quality. Students evaluated the course positively, noting its benefits in improving academic English writing ability, expanding vocabulary, increasing reading volume, mastering language norms and genre features, accumulating vocabulary and sentence patterns, and focusing on expression accuracy. The course also enhanced students' writing-related competencies, such as literature retrieval, critical thinking, English presentations, communication, self-reflection, data integration, audience awareness, and information summarization. Students' subjective perceptions of multifaceted skill improvement affirmed the course's effectiveness, reflecting the empowerment concept and unlocking student potential to generate or enhance various writing-related abilities. Task designs considered students' practical circumstances, progressing incrementally without imposing undue burden, thereby solidifying learning and cultivating abilities relevant to the tasks, achieving multifaceted empowerment.

5 Conclusion

This chapter summarizes the academic English writing course designed from the perspective of empowerment, highlighting its role in enhancing student agency and stimulating learning interest. Empirical research demonstrates that this instructional design improves students' academic English writing abilities, with students reporting positive self-assessments in reading, literature retrieval, and other writing-related skills. The study notes that, as a preliminary design, it has limitations in duration and participant scope. Future research is recommended to refine the instructional design, expand the research scope, and conduct longer-term longitudinal studies to further explore the impact of instructional design on the development of multifaceted abilities.

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